Jilted Evaluation Screening

                                           
Good Points

Use of camera shots x11
Parrallel music x8
The jump scare at the end x6
Acting x12
Amount of close ups x3
Repeated drinking shots x4
The strangling scene x2
The bathroom scene when Mia dissapears
Inter titles x10
Build of tension and suspense
Idea of 'tarrot lady' - she is intriguing
Love the dialogue x3
Editing was smooth
Pacing x4
Love the plot!
Intertitles were very clear and explained the narrative well


Bad Points

"I know what you did" was too quiet x4
Leave longer before the jump scare at the end to build more suspense
Could add sound to the jump scare
Not a fan of the intertitles - too slow
Slow pacing x2
Mix of location x3


Marks: 8,9,8,9,7,6,9,9,9,8,7,8,9,9,8,7,6,9

Average total mark: 9

I am very happy with this mark as it shows that we have imporved our trailer since the last time we had a change to show it to an audience. I am also content with the fact that we have far more good points to bad points this time highlighting that the audience was more impressed with the outcome of our finished product!